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Post by Afalstein on Aug 26, 2011 4:18:31 GMT
]The foot seems too long/big. Not that I could do better; it is a nice picture, especially with your coloring. Huh. Well, I suppose I could see big, especially in comparison to the other foot. It's closer, so it's supposed to be slightly larger, but I probably did overdo it. And the shape is a little awkward. Well, good to know.
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Post by warrl on Aug 26, 2011 4:58:45 GMT
Hmmm? What's wrong with the leg? Isn't a girl allowed to kick her feet back when she's surprised in mid-air? Check out where the hip is, where the knee is, where the ankle is, where the heel is. Make sure that the leg is straight from hip to knee and knee to ankle. It looks to me like there have to be at least two knees and I couldn't identify an ankle or heel.
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Post by smjjames on Aug 26, 2011 6:15:09 GMT
Hmmm? What's wrong with the leg? Isn't a girl allowed to kick her feet back when she's surprised in mid-air? Check out where the hip is, where the knee is, where the ankle is, where the heel is. Make sure that the leg is straight from hip to knee and knee to ankle. It looks to me like there have to be at least two knees and I couldn't identify an ankle or heel. And it also looks like her ankle is broken, might help if there was an identifyable heel.
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Post by paxjax123 on Aug 26, 2011 14:27:59 GMT
I think Tom said something about this a while back.
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Post by fish on Aug 26, 2011 15:00:18 GMT
jep: Further criticising of artwork in this thread (unless asked for) will result in suspension or banning.
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Post by Afalstein on Aug 26, 2011 16:15:46 GMT
Oh, bah. Nothing wrong with a little healthy criticism. Here, to clear up the matter, let's say I DID ask for it. It gives me ideas on how to fix things. Check out where the hip is, where the knee is, where the ankle is, where the heel is. Make sure that the leg is straight from hip to knee and knee to ankle. It looks to me like there have to be at least two knees and I couldn't identify an ankle or heel. I drew the whole leg out. I assure you that all the parts are there. You can even still see it, somewhat, if you look for the lighter lines. However, given you're not the only one seeing problems with it, apparently I didn't do it well enough. I could probably have drawn out the heel, but the angle was difficult. Good to know.
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Post by smjjames on Aug 26, 2011 21:08:16 GMT
@paxjax and fish: He seems to have meant don't be mean with the criticisizing, or thought people were being mean with criticism.
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Saru
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Post by Saru on Aug 26, 2011 22:00:56 GMT
New, less lazy and fixed version: old versionBetter to have shaded extremely lazy and ruining it in the progress than to not have shaded at all, or however the saying goes. :D.
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Saru
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Post by Saru on Aug 27, 2011 20:21:49 GMT
Well crap, this was supposed to be an edit. D:
oh god i am not good with computers how did this get here
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Post by Alexandragon on Aug 28, 2011 20:37:27 GMT
WOW! Gorgeous and amazing artwork, Saru!!!
Also, I like old version too)
P.S.: Afalstein, well, it's a "start"...
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Post by fuzzysocks on Aug 30, 2011 9:51:19 GMT
Took some artistic liberties with the colors! Watercolor and edited with photoshop :>
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Post by legion on Aug 30, 2011 11:04:18 GMT
[Insert standard words of praise for Fuzzysocks' art]
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Post by paxjax123 on Aug 30, 2011 11:08:02 GMT
[Insert standard words of praise for Fuzzysocks' art] It's sad but it's true. Because fuzzysocks' art just keeps getting more fantastic.
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Post by neal on Aug 30, 2011 15:05:29 GMT
Absolutely blew me away, fuzzysocks. That is gorgeous!
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Post by Alexandragon on Aug 31, 2011 9:44:29 GMT
Absolutely blew me away, fuzzysocks. That is gorgeous! Me too! That's amazing and gorgeous mind-blowing art! I'm loving this.
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Post by Nicer Atom on Aug 31, 2011 13:29:49 GMT
I'd say fuzzysocks' art is consistently awesome. That would be wrong, of course, as it just keeps improving. Also, does she have an account on any websites (e.g. deviantArt)? I'd like to be able to see all her art without having to comb through the forum.
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Post by neal on Aug 31, 2011 15:50:37 GMT
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Post by Tobu Ishi on Sept 2, 2011 17:48:34 GMT
What is this, I don't even. : [ (Answer: It is old fanart. "Spring-Heeled Jack"-old, in fact, but I still don't know what I was thinking. Today's page seems as good an excuse as any to trot out the crackart, though.)
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Post by Riess on Sept 2, 2011 19:28:41 GMT
The crackier the better, if you ask me. On that note, Smooth.
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Post by Tobu Ishi on Sept 2, 2011 21:22:13 GMT
Oh, sweet mercy. XDDD I love how expressive their faces all are. (Also, good strategy, Jack - or, at least, best possible strategy out of a sea of almost uniformly poor options.)
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Post by key on Sept 2, 2011 21:51:26 GMT
Saru, for some reason I'm wanting to say Macross, but that doesn't seem right. I feel like I've seen that suit designe just recently, but I can't think of anything better. EDIT: I missed the post where you said what it is. XD Don't you mean, makes a terrible gift? I love it!
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Post by Alexandragon on Sept 2, 2011 22:51:41 GMT
Tobu Ishi, nice artwork! I like it!) Ahaha! Riess, awesome artwork! And beautiful! And their faces! ahah!
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Post by legion on Sept 3, 2011 6:33:01 GMT
Tobu Ishi: nice!
Riess: I laughed.
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Post by hidden on Sept 4, 2011 3:49:39 GMT
Gunnerkrigg Court is awesome. Metal Gear Solid is awesome. And from what we've seen, Tom probably plays Metal Gear Solid. So here. Matt as Big Boss. As for why I chose Matt, well, he just seemed kinda Snakey to me... Well, that and other reasons. Edit: And yes, I had to borrow the face and mouth expression from one of the strips. I'm not very experienced with computer arts, you see, and I needed somewhere to start.
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Post by thereisnosaurus on Sept 4, 2011 9:06:23 GMT
the jack pick needs more popped collar
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Post by philosopherofsorts on Sept 4, 2011 9:46:58 GMT
Careful Jack, that approach is liable to leave you missing your dangley bits.
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Post by crater on Sept 6, 2011 2:12:57 GMT
oh Jack, may you never learn the story of Icarus
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Post by smjjames on Sept 7, 2011 7:18:00 GMT
What is this, I don't even. : [ (Answer: It is old fanart. "Spring-Heeled Jack"-old, in fact, but I still don't know what I was thinking. Today's page seems as good an excuse as any to trot out the crackart, though.) Looks like he is trying to give her a vampire bite or something.
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Post by fuzzysocks on Sept 7, 2011 10:31:13 GMT
The crackier the better, if you ask me. On that note, Smooth. I love your stuff riess... never fails to make me crack up(when it's silly)! But always well drawn!
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vollie
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oh, triple wow!
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Post by vollie on Sept 7, 2011 21:11:16 GMT
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